Some people believe that young people should have university education this will bring benifiy to society others believe that it will lead to graduate unemployment discus both view and give opinion
Education being a third eye sets the foundation of a successful career.presently handful of people reckon that it is mandatory to having a university education because it is wonderful approach toward mankind,whereas other masses claim that it makes people more unemployed. Here I would account for both sides with my perception.
There are manifold points to endorse former view.first and foremost ,higher education makes people to expert I'm diverse field.to justify,university gives therotical and practical knowledge in various sectors such as engineer,doctor manager,scientist and so on.so these can earn their livelihood. For instance,a person who wanta to became a doctor. Then he/she will have to go to university. After getting a degree he /she can became a doctor.hence,higher education opens several doors for earning money.next it also sets the platform for folks who have a brilliant talent In another field such as singing,painting and sports as well.therefore,it is a boon for youngsters to doing a university education. By contrast others have conflicting views.
To commence with,a massive number of people who have tertiary level degrees. So if figure of this will elevate,them the synergy between the students and warm place will imbalance.as a result, they will have a diffrustratiom in their minds toward their notion.
From my notion,both sides have their own significance undeniably having a degree is better instead of without degree because it can give opportunity to get a job.however, it has perilous for those who do not get job.in my opinion, government should open more resources of employment or establish multinational companies.
To recaptuilate, youngsters are the pullers of a baotion.so they should study up to the Tertiary level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, third, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50367647059 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4978038556 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.276885959 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.090909091 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226968134025 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818533209841 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499811555469 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116372125767 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559653568312 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.