Some people believe that young people should have university education this will bring benifiy to society others believe that it will lead to graduate unemployment discus both view and give opinion
education is the backbone of carrier and higher education is the key to the success for students. An educate student can really make a impact into the society by the achieved lesions from the university. this essay will discuss the both view in this regards.
If the student is a torch then education is a battery of it which helps him to shine in the dark night. educated people are never a burden of the community and neither for a nation. There is one or other way, student can shape their future by the help of knowledge they obtain from the collage. For example, student graduated from university are either engaged in the governmental jobs or starting their own in the basis of degree they achieve.
On the other hand, country like Nepal where thousands of students are graduated yearly are fighting for a single job. Due to the less growth rate, unemployment rate is excised and a competition in the mark is throat cutting. For example, a recent vacancy posted by Department of Health where 20 post was asked, however, the number of application was rocket by 19000 in the very post which displays the high rate of literate jobless people in the society.
To conclude, one or other way, educated un-employers are not the burden of the society. they can be mobilized in different sectors as per their education but the government and the monitory organization should definitely come with better plan to make a check and balance in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79446640316 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5749706483 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7920844213 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16668848372 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634723692716 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537540606616 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973953226701 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490085200554 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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