Some people say that fashion effects ourl live in a negative way other say that it has more positive effect on our lives

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eautiful which can be fruitful for them.Handful of people assert that the fashion has m...
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...on has more postive effects on our live.However,in my opinion, it has more negative inf...
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...more postive effects on our live.However,in my opinion, it has more negative influe...
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...as more negative influence on individual .I will discuss both pros and cons in up...
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... more negative influence on individual .I will discuss both pros and cons in upc...
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...idual .I will discuss both pros and cons in upcoming paragraphs. Doing fashion h...
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...ashion has negative consequences for us.First and formost,everyone spends enormous am...
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...ve consequences for us.First and formost,everyone spends enormous amount of money on cosm...
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...nks and when they do not return the loan,then they.get disappointed which can lead to...
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...t has many downsides. On the other hamd ,it has few positive consequences also.To...
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... hamd ,it has few positive consequences also.To begin with,fashion gives a sense of ...
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... ,it has few positive consequences also.To begin with,fashion gives a sense of loo...
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...positive consequences also.To begin with,fashion gives a sense of looking unique from ot...
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...makes us creative and when we do fashion ,then we feel energatic .Moreover,it give...
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...en we do fashion ,then we feel energatic .Moreover,it gives the employment a lot o...
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... we do fashion ,then we feel energatic .Moreover,it gives the employment a lot of people...
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...ashion ,then we feel energatic .Moreover,it gives the employment a lot of people.th...
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...eper whole saler and so on. To conclude,I strongly believe that fashion should be...
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...th.so fashion gives a lot of benefits to .we should follow fashion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44396551724 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20162885398 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.821078431 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.428571429 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1428571429 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149133072164 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691157593519 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687961639442 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100840753037 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735841575812 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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