Internet access should be chargeable or should it be free in this modern society? discuss
Providing internet access to the people in the present society should be paid or free was always a debatable topic. Even though, many people claim that in today's connected world internet access is a basic need that should be provided free. Others reject this notion and argue that everyone does not deserve internet access. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate both sides of the statement with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, in fast growing world internet access should be available to everyone in some form or another. Access to the internet is not only an essential utility for most but also, more importantly, one of the few media which an individual or group can reach out to the world and have their opinions voiced as equal to larger corporations. Moreover, internet acts as a medium for people to act, to discuss, to communicate and to assemble without restriction. For example, internet is widely used in elementary schools and schools are asking students to have access to the internet at home. Recently, in Japan, Municipal wireless network which is called Muni WI-FI has been introduced where both public and private sectors are involved to develop an network connection to provide free internet access to everyone.
On the other hand, people believe that everyone does not deserve to access internet. For example, prisoners should not have access, nor should children who are being punished for bad behavior. It is the responsibility of the person paying for the internet to determine who are accessing internet.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that access to internet should be provided free to everyone. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that internet inspires merit, globalization and sparks new outlooks in individuals
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...corporations. Moreover, internet acts as a medium for people to act, to discuss, ...
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Line 3, column 752, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...private sectors are involved to develop an network connection to provide free inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17532467532 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7485564067 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6683581769 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431248679675 0.242375264174 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159378399085 0.0925447433944 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109304613175 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295333578139 0.151781067708 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610169277334 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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