Pros and Cons of extreme or adventure sports?
The importance of extreme sports was always a debatable topic. Even though many people claim that adventure sports are beneficial to create awareness of potential danger. Others reject this notion and argue that these sports pose extreme life threatening. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The substantial influence of adventure sports has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. The following would further elaborate both sides and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, in today's liberal era, a person has the freedom to choose their choice of sports or recreational activities. For instance, smoking and drinking are the major causes of deaths yet they are not banned. It boosts the self confidence of athletes and ability to face worst situations. Moreover, these type of sports will bring revenue to the government and at the same time encouraging athletes.
However, there are pitfalls that negate with this argument and that can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of advantages and disadvantages of extreme sports, but the most alarming one rooted to the fact that it should not be at cost of human life and safety should be on priority before opting for risks in life. Approach to deal with these concerns are numerous, but the most effective one is proper guidelines and measurements which should be provided by government.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that such sports should be encouraged with proper facilities. In a nutshell, advantages of extreme sports has overweighs the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: face the worst
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88780125262 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9392726429 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218312517624 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801925444231 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790939233074 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130778833292 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889634966699 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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