Some people prefer to be surrounded by large group of friends and family for special events, like weddings or graduations. Others prefer to have smaller gatherings without any friends or family at all.which do you prefer? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your opinion?
Man is a social being and friends play an integral role in his life. Some people enjoy being with lot of friends and family whereas others find pleasure when they are with and around few people. In my opinion, small parties are better than large gatherings .This is due to the fact that small function’s are more affordable, enjoyable and give me more happiness.
Firstly, Big parties are very expensive to be conducted. There are several kind of expenses to account for. For instance , arranging a hall for 300 people and food for them is more costly than preparing a function for 20 people whom are familiar with. Additionally, there is cost involved in decorating hall ,light and sound for a big function conducted. While in a small gatherings there none involved as additional expense. Hence, financially considering a small gathering is acceptable.
Secondly, meeting close friends gives us more enjoyable moments than engaging with unfamiliar people. In a big gathering there will be people whom we might not recognize due the large crowd and meeting them is not as good as meeting our close relatives. For instance, in a large marriage function where there are thousands of guest i tend to stick to my close relatives rather than with unknown people. If I am with people whom I do not know I may not be enjoying the function. Thus , it is better to be surrounded by close friends and laughing with them rather than being with unfriendly people.
Additionally, the friendship bond gets even more closer when spending more time with a small group of people. This in turn would result in strong and healthy relationship with them. Since, that small group of people are more trustworthy than a huge partying friends. For instance, frequent gatherings with my close friends has enhanced my friendship with them due to their truthfulness and trustworthy nature. Therefore, a small group makes me happier than big group of people.
To conclude, enjoying and eating with small group of people is more worthy because it results in meaningful relationships which are long lasting rather than speaking and meeting lot of people in a function since its just a pastime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97534246575 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71802428384 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495890410959 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5019505076 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152245365458 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546792888542 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348519965315 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967977353793 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304489471439 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.