you have long been friends with someone, if they do something that you don't like, should you still be friend with him or her?
People in their life have different possessions but one of the precious assets that they have is their friend. We make a lot of mistakes in the life and some of them affect other people. Some people believe that a friend should be vigilant all the time to do always for their friend's favor and if he did something you do not like you should unravel your friendship tie. I disagree with these idea and I believe we cannot cut friendship in any small challenge.I feel this way because of two main reasons that I am going to explore in the following essay.
first and foremost, we cannot ruin our history with someone because of a mistake. As a matter of fact, friendship is built over a long period of time and diminishing your bond with like-minded friends means that you do not have charechtrestics of generocity. If you consider him as a friend and forgive him , it would consolidate your friendship tie. As a personal example. one of my best friends named Ahmed who I have known him since I was ten years old , divulged my secret to my girlfriend. I felt embarrassed and angry at the same time. However, after talking with him and understading that he felt guilty, I forgave him. After that we are closer to each other.
Secondly, it is hard to sustitute a friend with new person. friends are people's social investment. Admittedly, a considerable amount of time are allocated to grasp whether some one is reliable or not. Removing an indivisual from our life means that we should make a new investment to find a new reliable person that has same interest. suppose that you are a manager of football team and during a game, one of your favourite player makes a mistake and takes a red card from refree. As a manager you are in a dilemma. whether you should fire him and find a new player in his position or not. Buying a new player means allocating club's budget for a replacement. I think host of the people give another chance to the player. the player and the friend that makes a mistake are the same. we can give a new chance to him
In a nutshell, I adamantly believe that people should not cut their friendship with merely one mistake.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, i think, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50512820513 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60065864651 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497435897436 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6368588528 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3913043478 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9565217391 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347639567643 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930287428229 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958024272857 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204577008644 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858904171558 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.