some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people.do you agree or disagree?
population growth plays an important role and brings many problems such as poverty , illiteracy and unemployment.population growth is a major problem in third world countries . Many governments allocate more funds to tackle these problems but still not able to solve these problems. I agree that first priority of any government should be their own people.
There are many reasons why government is not able to solve these problems . Firstly financial resources are limited and many countries are already in debt. These funds must be reserved for the infrastructure development,social security measures such as free health care and shelters for homeless people.
Secondly, Welfare schemes which are made by the government have still not reached to the poor people. Corruption is also increasing day by day . For instance , a poor child who is intelligent but not able for scholarship and that is only due to corruption . Moreover , the government is still not trying to change the system . Government system should be such that each and every person should be directly benefited by all welfare schemes.
In conclusion , I stringly believe that the government must work on economic, financial and employment prospects of its own people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34020618557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16219324774 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8851369728 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158194639725 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581745088482 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523895314055 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093964119119 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146870513679 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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