nowadays, increasing unemployed people is one of the sirious problems in our society. Accordingly, a lot of people become the homeless.
some people argue that the government should look after those people by supporting the subsidy .
However, in my opinion ,to help them the financial aid would be not best way to solve this issue.
This essay will attempt to show you why my opinion is plausible.
governments are already supporting various programme for homeless such as providing food and shelter.
Morever, if some people lost their jobs , they can also get the unemployment benefits from the government.
However, there are some drawbacks in these policies.
firstly, homless who are getting some conpensations may not have any reasons to go back to their workplace. For instance, even tough they do not have enough money for living,
it is possible to eat and stay temporaly shelter.
secondly, period of the time for the unemployment benefit would be at least three months and it can be extended depending on their job history.
Therefore, unemployed people also take advantage of this policy altough they can get a job right after unemployed.
Instead of that, the goverments should make training job center and encourage them to make a conscious effort to get a job.
Unless the governments do any action, the citizen can feel a sense of loss to pay their texes.
To sum up, that the government help various people from different walks of life is positive way; however, the ways to aid them would be needed for the citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06614785992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67318687284 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3413625375 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257377124046 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905436690289 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750913528018 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881934142155 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805402766979 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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