On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of everything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
1. Describe the item you lost
2. Explain how you lost it
3. Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that on my vacation to Spain last week, I misplaced my brand new Samsung Galaxy X phone. It is black in colour but the screen looks transparent. At the back, it has a small star-like decoration and it is password protected.
Let me explain in details how the phone got lost. I was at Down Town Cafe in Barcelona, on Saturday 15th July 2018, and then suddenly my phone rang. It was the hotel manager calling me that there is an emergency at the hotel so I should evacuate the building thinking I was inside my room. This sets me into confusion because I had very important documents in my bag which is inside my room. From then, I cannot remember where I dropped the phone and I have been calling the number ever since.
It is good a thing that I had insured all my belonging to your company. Could you please make the necessary arrangements for me to get a new handset because I cannot do without it?
Thanks for your understanding and cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...brand new Samsung Galaxy X phone. It is black in colour but the screen looks transparent. At th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50261780105 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58504108926 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9324287699 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128411487839 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478616281243 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478246466026 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077168221823 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398061019537 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.