On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of everything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
1. Describe the item you lost
2. Explain how you lost it
3. Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that on my vacation to Spain last week, I misplaced my brand new Black Samsung Galaxy X phone but have a transparent screen. In addition, the back has a small star-like decoration and it is password protected.
Let me explain in details how the phone got lost. I was at Down Town Cafe in Barcelona, on Saturday 15th July 2018, and then suddenly my phone rang. It was the hotel manager calling me that there is an emergency at the hotel so I should evacuate the building thinking I was inside my room. Unfortunately, this sets me into confusion because I had very important documents in my bag which is inside my room. From then, I cannot remember where I dropped the phone and I have been calling the number ever since.
It is good a thing that I had insured all my belonging to your company. Could you please make the necessary arrangements for me to get a replacement handset because I cannot work effectively and efficiently without it?
Thanks for your understanding and cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.1.Thank them for the holiday and the photos2.Explain why you didn’t write earlier3.Invite them to come and stay with yo 78
- In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 61
- You recently read an article in a newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to inform him about it. Use the following points.1. What is the article about?2. What is the error?3. What you expect the ed 78
- Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter1. Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70680628272 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78439538355 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2247633341 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7272727273 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134767668024 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527157784412 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477264022434 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792665158267 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353161699981 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.