Some people say that saving money is a good way and other say that spending money is the best way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and your opinion.
In this modern era, parents both have to work to manage their family due to the cost of living in order that we can save some money for our future life, While others are thinking that we can enjoy our life whatever we like to live on this planet. I will discuss both analyses and solutions for this matter.
On the one hand, grant parents trustworthy and take care of their grandchildren. Parents can leave their children with them and they can work with the peace of mind. If we think about the daycare center, then we need to spend minimum 20% of our salary so we can avoid when parents will stay with us. However, grant parents will take up the big vital role to take care of their children. Although, parents will get influenced by them and also they will come to know that how we can manage with the family and budget to save money as well. We would not need to take tension in our life because we have made preserve life on the half of saving money. For example, we have a lot of option to save our money such as fixed deposit, retirement plan, and Insurance plan.
On the other hand, old generation people had five to ten kids. In this scenario that they can not spend more money but current situation people have one or two kids maximum in order that we can enjoy our modernized culture where we can adapt to that life. Generally, if we are locating in city culture, there is no option to save money due to cost of living and lifestyle. Nonetheless, we can spend money to acquire new knowledge that will help us to earn money as well. For instance, people who are all studying in International schools and colleges that overall cost like pay through the nose but once complete their studies that value will be very high.
To recapitulate this, people can spend a certain amount to grow their knowledge. however, we have to maintain some bank balance to manage and well grow in future not only us and will help to future generation as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this modern era, parents both have to...
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Suggestion: However
...certain amount to grow their knowledge. however, we have to maintain some bank balance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42659279778 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20657941574 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495844875346 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0274534006 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15956177635 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646775493073 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487205823439 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115238219442 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492292548006 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.