The increase in the rate of obesity is leading to an increase in the number of people suffering from heart disease.
What is the reason for the growth in obese people and how can this problem be solved?
According to the development of society, there are a wide range of issues appearing such as epidemic or recession. One of these problems is obesity which is the main culprit of diseases related to heart. This phenomenon is caused by some reasons; and this essay will give some measures to deal with obese people.
To begin with, citizens have a poor diet in daily life. They regularly consume junk food or processed products instead of handmade meals. Although fast food includes much fat and cholesterol which are major reason of overweight individuals, residents still choose this kind of food because of hectic life. Moreover, corporations trading convenient food namely Pizza Hut or Burger King frequently accelerate their customers to dine junk food through advertising. As a result, this product is consumed more and more. Another reason is sedentary lifestyle. Thanks to advance transportation, individuals are lazier to move. In addition, people have a tendency do exercise lazily because they are tired up at work. Their body, thus, become overweight and transfer to obesity.
To solve this trend, the government should develop organic food to reduce the quantity of fast food consumption. They could reduce price of this kind of food to make it ubiquitously. This will motivate humans use organic food which is good for health instead of junk food. The authority also indoctrinates citizens with negative effect of obesity to accelerate people keep healthy. Besides, to encourage people do exercise, employers should create regulations for employees as spending 15 minutes per day at the beginning of working day to do exercise. This activity not only enhances labors’ welfare but also builds a beautiful culture for companies.
In conclusion, to prevent the growth in obese residents, the government should encourage people use organic food and also do exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32214765101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81416206539 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4557171594 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4736842105 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160889522058 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475069026824 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440539470625 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111811285623 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354563108847 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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