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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Rapid improvement of technologies in the recent decades caused the quality of life to change dramatically. Apart from few people who have an overactive sense of nostalgia, almost everyone would agree that life is much easier nowadays in comparison to the era that our grandparents were children. Recent technologies, less physical works required to be done by human and improvement of health care have contributed to the enhance of life quality in the recent years.
The first point that deserves a word here is that rise of technologies, such as computers, internet and recently smartphones has he...
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Sentence: Recent technologies, less physical works required to be done by human and improvement of health care have contributed to the enhance of life quality in the recent years.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to the and enhance
Sentence: Another point that deserves to be pointed out is that enhancement of the healthcare and medecines in the recent decades has greatly improved the quality of life and made life easier for people.
Error: medecines Suggestion: medicines
Error: healthcare Suggestion: health care
Sentence: First of all, people gets sick or injured less because the robots and machiens are doing difficult dangerous tasks.
Error: machiens Suggestion: machines
Sentence: In a word, owing to causes and elucidations I made in the previous pragraphs, it appears reasonable to draw the well founded conclusion that life is much easier nowadays beacause of newly developed thechnologies and enhancement of the health care in the society.
Error: thechnologies Suggestion: technologies
Error: beacause Suggestion: because
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
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No. of Words: 409 350
No. of Characters: 2017 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.497 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.932 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.725 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.059 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.595 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5