A friend (Ms Sara) of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.
Dear Sara,
It is always pleasure to hear from you and I am very happy to know that you are planning a holiday in next month. I remember that last time when we mat you mentioned about you plan to visit places outside United Kingdom. I can certainly offer wisefull advice on travel.
Knowing that you are pursuing a degree course in history and have interest in visiting historical places, I would recommend you to plan for India. I have been to India four times and I must say that there is still a lot to cover. As you might be aware that India is comparably much bigger county than U.K and it can’t be seen in one trip. Therefore, it is required to focus on one part and I would suggest you to consider North India this time. Delhi is capital of India and I visit every time. Also, world famous monument “The TajMahal” is just 180 km from Delhi which can be covered in a day. Though, there are many five star hotels India, you may consider “International Youth Hostel” in Delhi.
The best part of being in India is to get an opportunity to tasty different styles of food. Initially British people do not like the food especially spicy one but food quality is superb and it is cheap as well. Do not forget to eat South Indian food mainly Dosa and different kinds of Chutney.
I hope that you would find the information useful and share you experience from India.
Love,
Kalla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, It is always pleasure to hear from you a...
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Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'pleasured'.
Suggestion: pleasured
...a, It is always pleasure to hear from you and I am very happy to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...say that there is still a lot to cover. As you might be aware that India is compar...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...is comparably much bigger county than U.K and it can't be seen in one trip. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54296875 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52141402521 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2102257874 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0714285714 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284170930239 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920249893151 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920482209372 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17605480603 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971430358128 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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