A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
say where you went,
where you stayed,
what you can do there and
what the food was like.
Dear Ram,
I heard that you are planning annual vacation to India, I have been there last year and we had a wonderful time together, especially in Goa, I would say, it is the cheapest beach place around the world. Hotels are quite inexpensive and very nearby to sea areas, we stayed in a Sun Bun hotel, it’s located in Cola, 5 minutes’ walk to the beach and 4 star rating in overall facilities.
The Goa is divided in to 2 regions old Goa and new Goa, new Goa have all the beaches where you can enjoy sun bath and bachelor parties during night time. Old Goa is completely different with churches and museums where antique ancient monuments of Portuguese are preserved, you must visit there. You can also go for bike racing and paragliding at Deccan Platte in old Goa.
Food is completely sea food, with variety of fishes, prawns, lobster and crabs. Mostly spicy with Indian flavor. They also have local wine it’s called pod wine, must try that also. Chocolates are famous from the Farrakhan market, if possible bring some for me, especially caramel based.
I hope you will have great time and let me know if you need more details.
With regards,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ram, I heard that you are planning annual vac...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t's called pod wine, must try that also. Chocolates are famous from the Farrakh...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you need more details. With regards, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38508059978 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8620743914 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4545454545 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197103065423 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710289309481 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779526034594 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125594815189 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807068251952 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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