Parents of obese children should not be punished for making their children fat.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that mothers and fathers should penalize their obese offsprings due to their weight. I disagree with the statement because the punishment is not a proper solution to the obesity problem. Instead of penalizing their children parent should have to focus on their diet and provide sufficient sports facilities. Punishment usually has a negative impact on one's life as it results in immorality and impairs their cognitive, communicative and sociable traits.
Firstly, obesity in children prevails due to lack of proper diet management. Mothers and Fathers should have to ensure proper food for their children, who are gaining weight, to tackle the problem of obesity instead of punishing their children. Panlization is harmful because it creates a gap between parents and children and their siblings. As a result, they become less sociable. Sometimes punishment boots negative characteristics in children, so that, they careless about their obesity problem. In Taiwan, the government has implemented a diet management plan in most of the education sectors to provide healthier food to students, as a result, health budget of the country reduced significantly after successful implication of the plan.
Secondly, It is believed that the best way to lose weight is to exercise which is usually achieved by different sports activities. Sports activities not only help children to relinquish their fat but also ensure a healthy life. Occasionally, to penalise obese kids causes the psychological and health problems, thereby mostly undergo severe stresses and feel insecure at their homes. For example, in Pakistan, many sports complex are constructed to facilitate the children who are confronting with fat gain issues. As a consequence, diseases declined dramatically in a fatty youngster.
To sum up, it is better to encourage fatty pupils to exercise and change their food habits, as both methods tackle problem positively. Moreover, proper diet and doing physical activities promote a healthy lifestyle among the children and enhances their moral in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4984423676 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92022801843 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8882664364 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.823529412 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377519795186 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118821605484 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931224078588 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223402178419 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793840471091 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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