Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Although a lot of people strongly believe that the current societies have secular basis and people's not attending to such fact will cost to devastate in market, it seems to me that business rapports can survive even with considering humanity and spirituality, both of whom are of aspects of man by which this name of "human" will deserve to him, without that nothing will remain of that except its body. This survival in the business space can exist due to maintaining the human relationships that exists among managers and differentiating between human and animal that signify of human dignity on which the next paragraphs will elaborate.
To begin with, even in current secular world what governs on feeling is humanity. However much human breaks through the technology's boundaries he cannot satiate with hand-making tools of technology; cannot express himself just through the internet; cannot replace face-to-face relationships by Skype chatting. At business space also this trend maintains. Market will not tolerate managers without committing to moral respects even though all relationships form on the basis of profit to such a point that sometimes a company broke on account of not understanding how business can run correctly. For example, imagine a manager who is profit-mania and for that he tramples forgiveness of employees. Gradually, employees understand that their straggling efforts have not any result and then simply give up.
Additionally, all of thing that distinguish human from animals is its consciousness. Provided that human ignore such creed, boundary will break, relationships will shape on the profit basis, human will resembles to Adam just in shape not in thoughts, and suddenly he come bake to its primitive human who competed with together just for survival.
All in all, to put the issue in to a nut shell, although profit buss mpany br[hprat to ecmy[1ic,at humist tolertiayat humwenore sucw human ignuld do mittinth togunl of hing will remain of m anianity. Howwwwwwww
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Sentence: Provided that human ignore such creed, boundary will break, relationships will shape on the profit basis, human will resembles to Adam just in shape not in thoughts, and suddenly he come bake to its primitive human who competed with together just for survival.
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Sentence: All in all, to put the issue in to a nut shell, although profit buss mpany brhprat to ecmy1ic,at humist tolertiayat humwenore sucw human ignuld do mittinth togunl of hing will remain of m anianity.
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