Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does this have a positive or negative effect on people.
Modern technology has changed humans life because machines can hard work easy from humans moreover big companies and industry rely heaving over machines. Machines have completely changed everyone life due to invention of machines and equipment. People use machines for their business and other work which can make their work easy.
To begin with the positive,s, machines help human in every field. Such as, medical, agriculture and so on. Using machines in medicle field has uplift the standard of human lifestyle with the use of technology surgeon can cure fatal disease. Such as, cardiac operation and surgical operation.moreover, techlogy play an magnificent role in agriculture and it's blessed farmers, number of machines such as, combine, tractor, cultivator and so on which is pave the way of farmers life. Technology have given number if machines which can provide lots of comforts to farmers.
On the other hand, in this modern era in the presence of machines unemployment is on the peak. For example, new generation indulge in bad activities to earn back and balley, which is detrimental for them as well as their family too. Last but not the least, most of the companies do their work with the help of technology by which people become more dependent on technical gadget.
To conclude, technology has more advantages as disadvantages therefore in my point of view, technology spread it's roots all over the world but individual have to use of it to some extent and government have to provide employment to people to fulfill their desires.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...work easy. To begin with the positive,s, machines help human in every field. Su...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...gical operation.moreover, techlogy play an magnificent role in agriculture and its...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'paved', 'paveed'.
Suggestion: paved; paveed
... tractor, cultivator and so on which is pave the way of farmers life. Technology hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13779527559 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79430225929 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3650073151 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19864182631 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789945773268 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519644884412 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122148618229 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458395875244 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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