Do you agree whit spending money on space or prefer we spend that money for the earth?
Do you agree whit spending money on space or prefer we spend that money for the earth?
I love everything that is somehow related to space; even my role model is Elon musk who spend most of his career life on space science; but I believe, sometimes we are obsess with space. It is good to know about other planet and space but in my view, there is so many things need to be done, here in our own planet, earth.
Firstly, we face more economical issues each single day. Every morning that I turn the television on I hear about economic problems which we are faced to. Even well developed countries like the united states has this type of problems too. So I believe, maybe we can cut some of the budget which is dedicated to the space institutions like NASA and use that money for solving other problems. The day when Trump announced that he has decided to decrease the budget of NASA I was a little depressed but after some days I said to myself, maybe it’s better. At least they can spend that money for solving bigger problems and help people in a better way. Why so, if you use the money for making more job opportunities it will be better rather than spending it for exploring in space.
Secondly, we have so many things need to be done on the earth. However, political men are doing their best to solve problems, but I think they have not done enough works yet. Still we have so many homeless people whom the number of them increase every day and we must do something for them. Beside that we have so many environmental problems like greenhouse gasses which have a deep effect on the life of humans and animals as well. In my eyes, we have not done enough things to overcome this kind of problems and solve them. Beside these two problems, we have so many other problems which we must do some works on them and all of them are highly money consuming. So if we still spend lots of money on space exploring annually it will be unwise.
To cut the long story short, I believe that increasing our knowledge about what is happening in the space is important but not till the day we have so many problems in the earth. Every day we are spending too much money for exploring life on other planets while the life on the earth is in a high risk and there is so many things which we can do to make the life for everyone better. Maybe if we spend enough money for solving the problems we have on earth, we do not need to find another planet which we can live on it, why so, without all those problems, the earth will be good enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obsessed'.
Suggestion: obsessed
...cience; but I believe, sometimes we are obsess with space. It is good to know about ot...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...planet, earth. Firstly, we face more economical issues each single day. Every morning t...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ems too. So I believe, maybe we can cut some of the budget which is dedicated to the space ...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...nk they have not done enough works yet. Still we have so many homeless people whom th...
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Line 7, column 665, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...all of them are highly money consuming. So if we still spend lots of money on space e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, at least, i think, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31315240084 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18250025032 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442588726514 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0105385107 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.95 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42984450903 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165606637568 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.214536049859 0.0737576698707 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.385581415452 0.150856017488 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.313152403172 0.0645574589148 485% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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