The bar graph below depicts information about the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories.

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The bar graph below depicts information about the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories.

The diagram illustrates how many average hours (every week) are spent on unpaid work by people in different types. Admittedly, unpaid work relates to such house activities as childcare, housework, and gardening. Overall, the most significant fact to emerge from the diagram is that the average hours of unpaid work per week consumed by the married women show their superiority over that of unpaid work per week spent by married men.

Regarding average time spent by married women, female with more than 3 children have a larger number at around 55. Moreover, this is followed by women with 1-2 children and without a child. While the former stands at roughly 50, the latter is accounted for about 30.

Turning to time consumed by married men, there is the highest average hour of unpaid work which is noted at nearly 18. In addition, males with 1-2 and over 3 children have the smaller numbers that are recorded at approximately 17 and 15 respectively.

In summary, while married women having many children spent much time on unpaid work, married men with more than 3 children have the minimum amount of average time consumed in comparison with other categories.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, while, in addition, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98469387755 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50748566925 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5176736126 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241788471585 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107870507889 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105863893361 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142944231499 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116889483383 0.0819641961636 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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