The world of work is changing rapidly ,so people cannot always depend on their jobs .What are the reasons of such a phenomenon and offer some measures to solve it .Should we welcome these changes?
The life style of people has been totally changed due to some innovative amendments in the field of technology and Job has become a grievously issue for an everyone in this modern era.Now a days ,employees want to keep themselves updated with the advancements around them.According to the given statement, this essay will analyze the varied reasons and solving points in upcoming paragraphs.
In this globalization era, growing number of folks are seeking for an employment and every person has need of job.Therefore,companies have an option to appoint new employees at less emoluments as well as dramatic fluctuations in the recruitment of workers become a major reason of this change in the field of jobs.Moreover,some agencies hire foreign workers from different nations due to good quality of an education because they have a particular knowledge to work in specific fields as well as they are very intellectual and fully dedicate towards their work rather than native employees.Furthermore,some innovative inventions in the technology ,People have depend on electronic gadgets like; computer and internet because these gadgets reduce the presence of human and makes the work more convenient in accurate way.
On the flip side ,employees have strict need to pay their attention towards work because their efforts are obligatory for the ameliorate of company and the retain of their jobs and employees should be more talented in their specific field of work.Moreover, comfortable working environment as well as formidable relations between colleagues are must important to continue jobs.
To conclude, according to some amendments in working conditions.Hence, jobs variations are typical in this modern era and employees should be scare
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50185873606 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46236181092 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 243.593282953 49.4020404114 493% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 370.0 106.682146367 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.25 20.7667163134 324% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186945007346 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115719270831 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00967777550224 0.0667982634062 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115719270831 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00967777550224 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 13.0946893788 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.99 50.2224549098 -10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.66 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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