Combat sports such as boxing are popular. Some people believe that combat sports encourage violence while others believe they promote self-restraint and discipline.
Choose which side you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position.
Combat sports such as boxing are enjoying its widespread popularity among most of the people especially youngsters. Some people believe that boxing gives rise to violence, however, others think that it leads to self-restraint and discipline. This essay will discuss the reasons why boxing encourage both violence as well as self-discipline.
Undoubtedly, boxing is a game of aggressive fighting between two boxers. Though it is a two sided match like other sports but it creates violence through intense fighting between the two. For instance, the players get too injured in boxing that sometimes it leads to their death as well. Thus, this sport convey a very wrong message of violence to the children who watches it.
On contrary, through the game of boxing, one can learn several disciplines in his life. Boxing teaches an individual the way of keeping oneself physically fit and healthy through exercises and healthy diet. To illustrate, myriad of young people get encouraged to keep themselves fit by watching boxing player's fitness. Hence, boxing plays as a way of living healthy life to people.
This essay discussed how boxing glamorizes the violence among youngsters and also it encourage someone to be fit and healthy. In my opinion, I strongly believe that combat sports like boxing foster more of violence than self-discipline among young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...sons why boxing encourage both violence as well as self-discipline. Undoubtedly, boxing...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
Suggestion: encourages
...e violence among youngsters and also it encourage someone to be fit and healthy. In my op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2752293578 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79205227917 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.306818163 50.4703680194 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4615384615 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306303904943 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104177432078 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873039806172 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196086769024 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135383569871 0.0609392437508 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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