Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Multiple aspects combined together makes a job sating for a person. Although, money is one of the aspects, it solely isn’t enough for a person to be happy with his job. Therefore, I disagree with the given claim that the most important aspect of a job is money which a person earns. There are myriad reasons as to why I am supporting my position. Some of them are listed below.
First and foremost, without job satisfaction, a person can’t be content just by earning a huge ton of money. For an example, say, I enjoy photographing animals, which is my passion and I am very good at it, now, instead of pursuing my skills, if I start working in an IT company which doesn’t interest me at all, even though, the money which is paid is prodigious, I will never be complacent and sad most of the time. Job satisfaction is a key factor, without which a person can be feckless in his job. If a person enjoys what he/ she is doing, work can become fun for them, and as a ramification, they will automatically progress in their field and earning good amount of money.
In addition to job satisfaction, respect, freedom and growth is equally important in a job. Absence of either of these can make money mundane. For an instance, one of my friend, Rani, used to work in a big MNC which treated her like shit and lambasted for even minor mistakes. She didn’t have freedom to try anything new, but, to keep doing the same old stuff. In spite of the big money which was paid, she was extremely dissatisfied with her job and one day left it to work in a relatively smaller company which treated her with respect.
Last but not the least, the third factor without which money doesn’t stand is work-life balance. In a job, it is extremely important that one has a work-life balance for a person to be happy. So, I had a cousin, Sunil, who used to have frequent fights with his spouse because of his tight schedule and unending work that he had to do even after reaching home from his office. Time is an inevitable factor for nurturing a relationship. If a person is unable to spend quality time with his family because of the work at office and home, then that work isn’t very good. On the other hand, my dad was a professor, where he could come back home and relax, instead of continuing with his work there. Even with the less pay, he was very happy as he could spend his time post work with his family.
In all, although, some people might argue that money, itself, can make a person happy and is the most important aspect of a job, I believe without job satisfaction, respect & freedom and a healthy work-life balance, money doesn’t stand high. There must be a balance of all in a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...rsuing my skills, if I start working in an IT company which doesn't interest me ...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... my skills, if I start working in an IT company which doesn't interest me at all, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, third, as to, in addition, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51012145749 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60269142481 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47975708502 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3164465143 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8695652174 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4782608696 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223806540001 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806213585057 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780530005679 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160974197451 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876033219522 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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