You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
1-Describe the training course.
2-Explain what the company could do to help you.
3-Say how the course will be useful for your job.
Dear Mr. Fred,
I am writing to express my interest in the training course where advertised in our company newsletter this month.
I have been working for the company over 10 years, and I have never been enrolled in any course before. The course relates to my core job description which is project management, and it will run for only five working days in our overseas branch where in Germany. If I managed to travel next week, I will catch up the course with its first cohort.
I submitted officially my interest though an application to the human resources department last week, but I did not receive their approval notification to date. Therefore, I would request that you address this matter personally with them and ensure that it is treated in priority to allow me to join the training course in the assigned schedule.
Course`s aim is to boost management and contractual skills in the industrial field, and it is extremely beneficial to my current work duties, especially for the current joint-venture contract. It has very special terms and conditions which should be reviewed and verified carefully from my end.
I look forward to receiving your feedback on my application as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...rest though an application to the human resources department last week, but I did not rec...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s possible. Yours sincerely, Ayoub
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06763285024 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84440571807 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7795234322 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242957609633 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831625306393 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382516841489 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103189603953 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379257498037 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.