You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express you gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to join your reputable company next month based on your official offer to me.
The offer is signed off, but I made a second thought to stay in my current position at Morley Parsons. Although your company aims would fit my skills, its location will be extremely far from where I am currently living. I won’t be an added value to your team after getting fully drained from the travel distance.
If I accepted your valuable offer, it will be a push forward in my career. Therefore, I am very thankful for selecting of my Resume to join your prestigious team. Please send my very best regards to all managers, especially Mr. Hemedia, who interviewed me as one of the new team.
Recently, I am handling the project`s department at my company. I am also fascinated with the daily activities either with colleagues or clients. This position helps to me to improve my proficiency. Not only it allows me to deal with different clients locally, but also pushes me to get in touch with different people from all over the world.
I look forward to receiving your acknowledgement.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81553398058 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80966915116 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650485436893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8178693155 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3076923077 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11515858561 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397319929296 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047497560958 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735768995662 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698359819553 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.