Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic development. Discuss both the side and give your opinion.
In today's developing world more and more development take place day by day. In development economic development plays crucial role, some people think it is necessary to reduce poverty, where as others think economic development should be stopped because it damages our environment. I will discuss both the side in coming paragraph and give my opinion in conclusion.
Firstly, economic development is the development of country, which help country to reduce poverty in many ways. If country is economically developed then government should able to provide free education to poor people, which help to reduce illiteracy. Also, government should able to provide free accommodation to poor people and more job opportunities to youngsters, which directly reduce the poverty. To corroborate above fact we can consider example of economically developing country India where free education and accommodation are provided, which help India to reduce poverty. So, economical development is very essential to reduce poverty.
Secondly, economic development also effects the environment. Country develop many new industries to provide job opportunities which is very essential for economic development, but the emission of industries may harm the environment. Furthermore, Government has to provide free accommodation to poor people, which requires hefty amount of land. Thus deforestation takes place which is big issue for environment, because it causes global warming. And, it also effects to inhabitants of forest. But, these issues are rectified by planting trees on other place and by reducing industrial emission.
To pen down, I would like to say that economic development is very essential to reduce poverty and adverse effect of economic growth can be rectified by taking some governmental measures. So, in my concern economic development is very essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66071428571 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12141835566 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.53309342 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371051753879 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124072768406 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088596030727 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237348466744 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955473435925 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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