The increase in population may lead to global crisis. Some people say that it is necessary for economic development of the world and society. Discuss your opinion.
Population of the world has been increased over the years due to some reasons. While others would argue that this increased population can lead humanity to global crisis, I believe this increment in population is required in order to develop the economy of the world and Society.
On the one hand, with the increase of the population the things require to feed them and place to stay does not increase. All the other resources are in the same quantity as it was before. Inflation in the population may use all the resources available in the nature. As a result their might be scarcity of food, water and land. Also due to this scarcity, crime rate is likely to increase. And with this much population it is hard to impose rules and regulation properly. This can create more problems and eventually it may lead to global crisis. But with the advancement in technology, it has become easy to produce food. Skyscrapers are built to leave because of lack of land. So these problems can be overcome with stressful successful majors.
On the other hand, more population means more manpower. By using these manpower we can build industries and it will help to improve the economy of the world. Moreover, more minds will work to solve a problem to develop a new technology. This mean any kind of development in the society as well as in the world will be more faster than less population, As it is said two are better than one and three are better than two. With proper awareness among this population, they can even overcome with the issues generated by themselves. Tis way, to improve economy of the world and society the population becomes an essential aspect.
To conclude, inflation in population may lead to some global problems because of the limited resources; it is also helpful to improve the economy of the world and society and which awareness the problems related to population can be solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'feeding', 'feeing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: feeding; feeing
...se of the population the things require to feed them and place to stay does not increas...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ht be scarcity of food, water and land. Also due to this scarcity, crime rate is lik...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this manpower' or 'these manpowers'?
Suggestion: this manpower; these manpowers
...opulation means more manpower. By using these manpower we can build industries and it will hel...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...society as well as in the world will be more faster than less population, As it is said two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, well, while, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77878787879 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58498347724 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0879964326 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220667032847 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665029007488 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787496096734 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172005952357 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926332514907 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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