Happiness is considered very important in life why it is difficult to define?What are the factors that led to happens?
The Felicity is the word which cannot describe vary from person to person.This eassy would through light on tge matters which are concerned with that.
To begin with,defining happiness is quite challenging because the requirements to achieve it is not fixed.The human being try to find the ways of being happy since ancient time but it seems to be difficult to search the roots of joy.There are several reasons which led to make it difficult.As the economical status of a person is not constant and he do all the efforts to stable it and that makes him worried.The another instmce,suppose a couple has not conceived a baby since too long which is a matter of concern because of that they become stressed and they try to improve their physical health to concieve a child.
However, their are various factors those are commonlu regarded as the main aspect to be happy in life.The physical development is the foremost factor that is totally related to the happiness.The family which is living satisfactorily together and share their quality time due to this the happiness increase.Furthermore,the wealth of the person play inevitable role in their live as an instance,the organisation is giving salary, incentives including bonus according to the qualification so that person would feel happy and would pay more attention towards his work.
In conclusion,the joy is not an easy concern of life that why person find it difficult.Though,we laugh in our day to day life but does not feel happy from inside due to causes and above discussed factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03891050584 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17944788529 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.753443085 49.4020404114 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.75 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.25 20.7667163134 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155205176971 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878860538887 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551266930151 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878860538887 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551266930151 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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