Today the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
Industrialisation and economic empowerment l has seen a rise in population in major cities. With brain drain from smaller towns and developing countries there has been an outburst of migrants throughout all business hubs and metropolitan areas. Below are some of the repurcussions on the quality of life in large cities and some of the possible solutions to it.
With increase in population there is an increase in congestion resulting into a degraded quality of air. These have caused various respiratory diseases with reduction in life expectancy ratio. To leverage the benefits of cheap labour many industries hire from different countries. This is causing a burden on housing facilities as well which has caused urban areas to be concrete jungles.There is an increase in the food chains that offer fast food which have detrimental effect on rhe health. Many people fall in the category of obese people that leads to various health issues.
I strongly advocate the thought that every problem has a feasible solution. Vertical gardening is a newly developed concept that can develop garden area in high rise buildings and skyscrappers that have limited space.Such concepts can be mandated or encouraged . Encouraging people towards healthy living can act as a boon the cities. Food products that are unhealthy should have its negative impacts also being advertised appropriately . Vehicle free days in some cities can be observed to promote public transport and reduce release of harmful pollutants in the air. Industries should be regulated with adequate norms. The life of the people can be improved with some focus on living a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25378787879 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89570582357 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6653124785 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115055855491 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368116738542 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613732087582 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083564824198 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400227349359 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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