Some people say that new advancements in factory farming and the creation of new combinations of fruits and vegetables are not beneficial while others disagree with this opinion.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Advancement in technology and globalization has changed the facet of life and revolution in agriculture sector is no exception. Advocates are of the view that growing the fruits and vegetables in artificial way has lot of positive outcomes, while opponents postulate that it is not beneficial at all. Before putting forward an opinion, this essay intends to delve into both the perspectives in following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are enormous benefits of producing the eatables in factory and artificial breathing to create a new products. Firstly, it helps to meet the burgeoning demand for food products. As population is growing at fast pace, it is very difficult to serve the mammoth number of humankind with traditional way of farming. Therefore, factory farming is the key to solving this problem. Secondly, environmental dependency can be removed from the farming as any type of fruits and vegetables can be grown in artificial environment. Consequently, nutritional eatable are available around the year. Thirdly, with breeding techniques, nutritional value of the food product can be increased. To justify this, a group of scientist from Sweden, added extracted almond oil in the seeds of ground nuts so that healthy fat content can be increased in peanut butter. As a result, healthy fat increased in the ground nuts which helps to control the obesity.
On the contrary to this, several types of viral infections are caused by the scientifically grown food products. This is because of the reason that manually control environmental conditions give rise to different type of bacterias which are dangerous for human health. Additionally, these new type of viruses caused by the artificial breathing does not have cure and sometimes causes death of the individual. For instance, a recent study by food processing department of Punjab University reveals that factory grown food products are fifty percent more vulnerable to ill-effects as compared to traditionally grown eatables.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned statements provide more plausible arguments in favour of factory farming as compared to the counter-part. In my opinion, artificial breeding of food products should be encouraged and resources should work on minimizing the deadly effects.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
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Message: Use past participle here: 'cured'.
Suggestion: cured
... the artificial breathing does not have cure and sometimes causes death of the indiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46742209632 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11553174451 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563739376771 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2845350152 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.222222222 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183793302342 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502121265697 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04279087026 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104528458195 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043377877425 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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