You have been offered a job overseas that you applied for. Write a letter to your friend who already knows about that job as well - tell what kind of job is it - explain why you applied for this job - ask your friend about the country
Dear Aman,
I hope you will find this letter in Radiant health and best of spirit. I am writing this letter to let you know that I recently changed my job.
Last week,I got the offer letter from Eagle restaurant which is a major food supply chain in London. They offered me position of project manager for there brand new hotel in Central London. Hence, I am getting a chance to establish the business from scratch and I have to move to London for that.
As I told you last time, my previous job was quite isolated and was not getting the chance to hone my skills. That is why I applied for this job in United Kingdom. When I invited for interview I found this job quite interesting and made up the mind to join this.
I know you also worked in London for quite a long time. Can you please provide me the basic information about the city like we are good hotels and restaurants are dotted around the city. Also, the best places to find accommodation.
I am waiting for your response.
Best regards,
Amar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... I recently changed my job. Last week,I got the offer letter from Eagle restaur...
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Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing for your response. Best regards, Amar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44680851064 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28094136849 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0048073312 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3076923077 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343575035551 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115639661717 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960156051695 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17720773332 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795999423194 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.