As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology is basically a specific method, materials, and devices used to solve practical problems. No, it's not true that as you depend on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will deteriorate. Technology is the great innovation done by humans. it's used to make the things easier. Technology increases our productivity and changing the way of doing work. Today there are lots people depend upon technology
Everyone using some technology in their work. It is used in doing daily Activities. Technology beginning starts in the 90s it is the greatest innovation of the 20th century. it improves your life effectively. Take the example of the smart band/watch, social media
Technology digitalizes the everything it makes peoples life different. As we see our example of smartwatch it can calculate your heart rate, count your steps, monitor your sleep and there are many different functions which make your life easier.
its design is sleek, smart thin lightweight kind of watch. There is another example which is social media. Social media is a platform where we can interact with anyone in the world and see there photos and activities.
The usage of social media increases day by day.
we can take the example of facebook people use this daily to check the activities of people which are present in the different location. Today you can contact anyone in the world by just dialing phone number
In the past, people send the message and it will be delivered in days but today you can send messages and get replied instantly we know that everything has advantages and disadvantages.
so keep that in mind excessive use of anything make its impact wrong.
So use things wisely and in the limited amount. So we can say that technology makes our life easier and the ability of humans to thing increases and it is important to learn new things in daily life it matters a lot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Its
...is the great innovation done by humans. its used to make the things easier. Technol...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e are lots people depend upon technology Everyone using some technology in their ...
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Suggestion: It
...reatest innovation of the 20th century. it improves your life effectively. Take t...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everything'?
Suggestion: the; everything
... social media Technology digitalizes the everything it makes peoples life different. As we ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...steps, monitor your sleep and there are many different functions which make your life easier. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
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Suggestion: We
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64459890501 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496913580247 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6483892092 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.21951772744 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169775126307 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052057840337 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885024526514 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619444671642 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914737431233 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.