Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that fast food plays an important role in our life and fast food is found in numerous countries. While I agree that fast food has detrimental effects on our health, I also believe that it brings tremendous advantages to our life.
There are several reasons why we eat fast food. Firstly, in busy time schedule, we do not have time to cook our meals. We spend too much time on doing desk jobs which means we have no time for cooking. Eating fast food is very convenient, quick and is the best way not only to feed stomach but also save our time. Fast food are cheaper than other food to buy and easy to prepare. Furthermore, fast food gives us a lot of choices. There are numerous fast food restaurants in the city, and the taste is often good.
However, it is wrong to reject the arguments about negatives of eating fast food. First of all, fast food causes tremendous problems to our health. It contains too much fat and calories, which is the main reason causes diabetes, heart attack and obesity. This lead to an increase in spending so much money on treatments. Besides, people rely too much on fast food. They do not concern about a balance diet and a healthy lifestyle. Populations in development countries are increasing overweight. They also reckless about doing exercise and likely to have sedentary lifestyle.
In conclusion, although eating fast food have tremendous advantages, but I firmly believe that fast food is likely to have harmful impacts on our life. People should aware of these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71641791045 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48411078974 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6841172078 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5263157895 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1052631579 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437640194387 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147479647291 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11135711529 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305587383118 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801454218703 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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