You are very disturbed by the noise coming from a restaurant opened nearby recently.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say–
What problem do you experience?
– What should the management do about it?–
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the noise which is being created from your new restaurant wherein the city closest to my house.
I have been a resident on North Road over 10 years, and I have never had a reason to complain before. However, I measured recently a strong noise coming from your restaurant in the vicinity at night. It has been reported on several occasions by many people who live around and nearby.
The problem is with the daily program of your restaurant at night which contains a musical celebration. It is actually a good performance, but its sound reaches all houses. When we go to sleep early, we could not due to the program`s loud sound. This will absolutely have a negative impact on our performance at work.
City`s law defines that any noise from restaurants during night hours is not allowed in the residential areas as per the Noise Act. I would therefore request that you address this matter personally with your administration department who is responsible for the night shift and treat it in priority to stop the night show.
I look forward to the noise being stopped.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g stopped. Yours faithfully, Ayoub
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91584158416 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82147384107 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4706101662 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12880812283 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422682819373 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499341852119 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070598165556 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275158166984 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.