Some people believe that in this modern world modern world we are increasingly becoming dependent on each other while others believe that people are more independent nowadays. discuss both and give your opinion.
While it is often thought that individuals, nowadays, rely upon each other more, there are some who oppose this view. In my opinion, I think that owing to having a stressful life, people are increasingly depending on each other to make their life more pleasant.
On the one hand, some people consider that they are independent in this contemporary era because they can fulfil their all requirements themselves. In the past, only men use to earn money and their spouses were dependent on them for every need; however, presently, the scenario has changed, and females are also working, resulting in lowering their dependence on husbands or other family members. Another point to consider is the advancements in technology because a few decades ago, males were dependent on females for food and other basic facilities, but nowadays, various appliances, such as Microwave and washing machines, are available which enable men to fulfil their rudimentary needs by their own.
On the other hand, I agree with those advocating that individuals are becoming more dependent on each other because they think the emotional sport is imperative in this busy and competitive world. Since people are confronted with various detrimental psychological problems, such as frustration, stress and apprehension, it is indispensable to spend time with family members and friends to share these problems and find appropriate solution to solve them.
To conclude, while people may vary in their opinions, I personally believed that to get rid of tensions and stress people are increasingly relying upon each other, nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...wing to having a stressful life, people are increasingly depending on each other to make their life more p...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ments themselves. In the past, only men use to earn money and their spouses were de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33464566929 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87400765828 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1428545772 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.375 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326663937928 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149715391895 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887536292629 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215291274475 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764006930387 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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