Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all mean their believe that these games are contributing to children development .now discuss other view and opinion .
With the rise in the modernization a man has transformed his life tremendously . He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungle to take first step on the moon never the less there are some issue which remains irevocable and as complex as ever for intense , the given topic assertly that are computer games have bad impact on the children or helpes to develop to the children . Through this essay I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through example and assertion assumption and shape up my opinion.
On one side argument , there is a group of people who believe that computer games have a bad effect on the children .They strengthen there view point by claiming that , children who played violence game are more likely to aggressive feeling and behavior and thoughts. Children spent most of time in the front of TV , mobile .They are not focus upon their study .For a good instance children used more time to watching the screen . It causes many effects on the health of the children .the eyesight of the children became weak .They can not easily read books and newspaper .
Contrary to this is an opposing group of people who believe that computer games are contributing to children developmemt . To make their argument convinencing they claim that playing the video games improve the hand and eye co-ordination .It also sharpen the memory of children and they learn the lesson of multitasking .A good lesson is that when the children play the video games .They learn the more experience and improved their skill which helps to the their mental development .
Never the less , weighing both the option .I believe there is no single conclusion still I take the ground that an effective clap require both use of hand so , it
depend both uses of hand so it depend either we know that it is important for the overall development of the children with in the limit so it may not effect their faces of life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77477477477 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5088569761 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.862652626 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.666666667 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 5.01903807615 1076% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361099043466 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145111277868 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979039668505 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172719347742 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995242651584 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.