Now days people throw away old things and adapt new things . Do the disadvantages of throw away society outweigh any possible economic advantages .
" It is true that people tendency to discard there old and damage possession . these days when they own some things new ". One of the pressing concerns is regarding the given topic whether people adapt new things as well as throw away old things , it has any economic benefit or not ? In this essay ,I am going to examine this questions from both points of view .
On One side of the argument , there are people who argue that drawbacks of considerably outweigh its benefits . The first and foremost reason for believing this is that " In this modern era ", there have lot of drifts and competitiveness in the school , college , society and there are many other places because people have a competition due to this they are build EGO in there mind . In addition to this is that people demand for more use of products , just because they show there status in front of other . So that's way , most of people throw away old things and adapt new things . The best epitome is that the survey conducted by "Canada And USA "contain only 5.2 % of the population on till yet , are accountable 31.5 % of consumption . while , " South Asia " which has 22.4% of population is responsible for only 21% of consumption behind the reason is that people buy new things and throw away old things .
On the other hand , It is possible of making the opposing case which is often argued that in fact the advantages of throw away old things adapt new things . People often have this opinion because In the modern world , society moves forward because now days technology have more advance as people do not like to old things such as people have any old thing and it have any fault in that thing as people throw away old things and buy new things . Moreover , people have personal benefits ,and also have been economic growth , if people adapt new things .
Nevertheless , weighting both the opinions , I believe that there is no single conclusion still , I take this ground one effective clap require the use both of hands as so people should use 3R process as well as government should implement rules and regulation for using the 3R process . The possibilities are endless a person just have to take incihative and make the change .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, while, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73264781491 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47758545871 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488431876607 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0912287008 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.733333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470431509771 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175454317499 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176504166558 0.0667982634062 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291015344591 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182919225873 0.056905535591 321% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.