Education is recognised as vital to future of any society in today's world governments throughout the world should make education compulsory for all children between ages 5 to 15 to what extent do you agree or disagree?
As education is most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world. in the present scenario, education is way to open several routes for future. Therefore, the given description assert that, should legislation in every part of world make education mandatory from innocents to teens or not? I will explore all the dimensions of the essay before shaping up my opinion at end.
to commence with, there are some people who believe that government should make learning necessary for all children. they makeep their points convincing by claiming that, education is not only basic right of every individual but also prominentry for future of both; society and of individuals. presently, in some parts of world there are many children , who are not able to go to school for former education, and also some consider study not important. Therefore, by this act of execution bodies majority of young brigades will be a part of study institutions, which makeeps the society more progressive.
the another fact to consider is that, due to this action of law makers will boost the economy of one's nation. As if all the young ones will study more income will go to government in turn of study expenses. similarly, literacy rate also increase in under developing countries which support them for their way to progress. the quintessence can be india , where it is surveyed that about 65% of children are not getting primary knowledge. so the juveniles of present of every country are it's future, if they do not have any education will not be able to participate in development. so edunitive community means adroit denizens.
to elucidate, in my perspective, education is necessary for every one. So government shouldo bring enthusiasm in public by providing free primary education and innovativery methods for study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05685618729 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79593717921 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2080867841 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246077367684 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774638486514 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560283174553 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155562382333 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520633294279 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.