The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity from geothermal energy.
Overall, cold water has to pass through two stages which require some specific conditions before transforming into steam for electricity generation in the remaining steps.
In the first stage of manufacturing electricity, a vast amount of cold water is pumped down beneath the ground, with the depth of 4.5 kilometers. The water is then injected through geothermal zone which is known as hot rocks with the aim of converting cold water into hot water. However, the product would not be satisfactory if the injection did not well carry out. Hot water is pumped up into a condenser and evaporates to form steam afterwards.
In the two final steps, the resulting steam passes into a generator turbine in order to implement the rotation of turbine system. After that, the amount of power from the turbine enables generator to produce electricity. Eventually, electricity generated is transferred to the geothermal power plant for widely usage.
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- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32515337423 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91450433244 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6013797801 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0397420560384 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222723738928 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348342104266 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0343475267447 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345104478221 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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