You migrated to another country.
Write a letter to your friend to describe your present life and tell him/her why you choose this country.
Dear Adam,
I am sorry I haven’t written for so long. As you know I just moved in to Canada few weeks ago. Ever since I arrived, I was busy and didn’t have the luxury of time to write to you.
First, let me update you with most of my recent news and describe the new life I am living over here. I rented a tiny apartment in the middle of Toronto, the capital city of Canada; it is a bit crowded in here because it’s near all sort of essential services, such as hospitals, shopping malls and public parks. The kids and I are enjoying our time despite of being busy during the morning searching for a job. Of course right now you are wondering why I chose Canada?? Simply, Canada has the best medical coverage system and on the educational segment, it is ranked as the 3rd best country worldwide. Canada is becoming more and more popular everyday and a great destination for immigration.
Finally, don’t forget to send my regards and love to your family, till we meet soon my friend.
Yours,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rry I haven't written for so long. As you know I just moved in to Canada few ...
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Line 5, column 649, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...anada is becoming more and more popular everyday and a great destination for immigration...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, of course, sort of, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54301075269 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50346620617 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693548387097 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3210095545 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114869861072 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397748129901 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459246686455 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07500184229 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000941076690895 0.0580467560999 2% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.