What roles should governments, companies, and individuals play to combat climate change?

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What roles should governments, companies, and individuals play to combat climate change?

Submitted by hchandra on Wed, 07/04/2018 - 14:54

Climate change is a burning subject of the current generation. Nowadays, newspapers are filled with calamities happening around the world. Many countries, organisations and NGOs are educating people about its impact and possible solutions to reduce the root cause of it. In this essay, I shall discuss various causes and possible solutions to curb the climate change.

To begin with, it is irrefutable to say that in the last few decades climate has been changed drastically. With the advent of technology, we are using various luxurious products which emit a significant amount of greenhouse gases in the environment like a refrigerator, air conditioner etc. Greenhouse gases impact ozone layer which helps us by stopping UV rays from the sun and maintaining earth’s temperature but excessive carbon emission around the world is resulting in drastic changes around the globe. For example, scientists have discovered a hole in the Ozone layer just above Australia. Likewise, in India, the monsoon is showing erratic behaviour from the last couple of years.

As a consequence, it is our duty to control climate change and its impacts. The government must make stringent policies to control emission of greenhouse gases. Further, the government can also add additional taxes on industries or vehicles producing carbon and other dangerous gases. A sapling of trees can also help in reducing carbon from the environment. Companies can reduce the use of paper and educate their employees to use office transport. As an individual, we can also contribute to reducing carbon emission by using public transport or car-pool wherever it is possible.

To sum up, climate change is a serious issue and government, individual and organization must do their best to combat it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
...irrefutable to say that in the last few decades climate has been changed drastically. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, for example, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32384341637 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94842381174 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1669144308 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114410242948 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415037231324 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639600453535 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887002801937 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648271571538 0.0609392437508 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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