What roles should governments, companies, and individuals play to combat climate change?
Recently, the technological advancements and innovations have created environmental issues that caused a dramatic increase in the climate change. The primary roles and active involvements of the humanity, companies, and governments are of paramount importance to combat the negative effects of climate change. In my opinion, everyone in the society should unify and shift the primary focus to save the planet.
In the global context, all the governments should legislate a rule to stop the deforestation which is destructing the Earth's atmosphere. According to a recent survey, almost 60 percent of third world countries are burning the trees in the mountains. This is a clear evidence that the smoke caused by the fire decreases the thickness of the Ozone Layer, and eventually increasing the global warming. Therefore, every government of a nation should penalize and ban the cutting of the trees to lessen the chances of climate change.
Similarly, the companies and citizens should switch to a carbon-neutral activity. For instance, the carbon usage of the cars should be measured accurately based on the threshold limit. Additionally, the car companies should come up with an environment-friendly vehicle, such as less carbon emission. As a result, the less emission of carbon from vehicles will reduce the toxic air in the surroundings. Hence, the roles of companies and every individual to shift to a carbon-neutral exercise play a vital part in solving the chronic issue in climate change.
To conclude, the roles of the governments, companies, and all the people are compulsory and are of paramount significance. Thus, in my opinion, all the people should play their role to save the world against climate change for the betterment of the environment and humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, third, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34519572954 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16187714879 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533807829181 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9635139326 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298771358305 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861876695894 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790257727014 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168308557825 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846696046683 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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