Some people beleive that air travel should be restricted beacause it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources .To what extend do you agree or diaagree?
In this tech savvy era,aircrafts are also a source of travelling to different places.It is argued that air transportation leaves baneful air in the evironment and must be banned.In my opinion,i believe using air facilities has made travelling convinient and plays imperative role during emergency situations.
First and foremost,invention of airlines is a boom for human life.As,earlier going to other places was time consuming and difficult.But,now large distances can be covered in short span of time.Also,people could briskly go to other contries,which stimulated globalisation and amiable relationships among the countries.To cite an example,according to a report published by"World's transport department,80% of people prefer to travel by airbus as compared to other means of transportation.By this,masses can save travelling time ,and utilize it in other eminent work which is beneficial for the development of the country.This clearly shows that government curtail the air fare to urge enormous amount of people to travel by using aeroplanes.
Secondly,with the advent of cargo aircrafts,made it accessible to transport goods to other places.In other words,now any stuff can be available in any part of the world.Furthermore,if natural calamities arises,crafts can be used to provide fundamental stuff to the masses and helps in saving their lives.To exemplify this,In India during a flood in Kedarnath area 70% of people were saved by using amphibious aircrafts.Looking at this,they play a significant role in human's life .
To conclude,i would like to reiterate,travelling by air is conducive for modern life as it saves time and have indispensable role to trasfer goods at long distance places.Therefore,government ought to encourage air travelling rather than putting restrictions on them.
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also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, in short, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79323308271 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.08898550915 2.80592935109 146% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.350607151 49.4020404114 379% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 385.25 106.682146367 361% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.5 20.7667163134 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.25 7.06120827912 400% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170656091719 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104717698015 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167412664193 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104717698015 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167412664193 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 13.0946893788 299% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.43 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.19 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.49 8.58950901804 145% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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