Some people believe that laws change human behavior.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with examples.
It is evident that laws are made to follow, however, not all individuals prefer to do so. Some people believe that laws lead to the changes in human behavior, however, others hold a conflict notion regarding this. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will give my opinion.
To start with, laws indeed shape the human perception and behavior in society. More specifically, it brings the optimistic changes in humans because to follow a law which is in favor of human's well being is always advantageous. Traffic rules in Dubai, for instance, are extremely stern with high financial penalties but it's in favor of human beings. Thus, citizens here are inclined to follow these rules because of getting fined, which has really brought a positive changes in their behavior to drive safe on road.
On the contrary, not all individual's behavior get shaped by the laws. Few individuals in our society do not want to follow any kind of laws keeping their adverse consequences aside. Despite the strict law of not knowing the gender of baby in the womb, for example, many people in India are availing this service and aborting the girl child before her birth. Hence, laws sometimes do not prove to be a powerful stimuli to shape the perception and behavior of few people in our society.
This essay discussed how laws make a positive changes in some individual's habit, however, it does not change the behavior of all people in society however strict it is. In my opinion, laws and regulations really bring a positive change in human beings but it should be in favor of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'stimulus'?
Suggestion: stimulus
...sometimes do not prove to be a powerful stimuli to shape the perception and behavior of...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ow laws make a positive changes in some individuals habit, however, it does not change the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81751824818 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4981531886 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5529351205 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272913267876 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103854956812 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680320974694 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172301400305 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264055440709 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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