The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000.
Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.
The given two pie chats below gives information on the changes in the worldwide population of different places between the period 1900 and 2000.
Overall, during both the period Asia had the largest population in the world. Whereas north America was stable during both the period.
The worldwide population during 1900 was about 1,600 million. Asia had the largest percentage of population in the world with 60% of total. While Europe had 25% population (including Russia). The two western continents North America and Africa contributed 5% and 4.5% respectively. Latin America had 3% population in the world whereas other places were about 2.5% during 1900.
The worldwide population during 2000 had reached to almost 6billion. Same as 1900, in 2000 Asia had the largest population in the world but with decreased in the percentage to 54%. North America was at same percentage as 1900. Africa and Latin America had almost doubled the population during 2000. The Middle East and North Africa region had 6% of total population.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-11-16 | Rajan wahla | 72 | view |
| 2020-03-07 | Prabh brar | 100 | view |
- The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas 75
- People today move to new cities or new countries more than ever before What challenges do they experiences What strategies are there to meet these challenges 72
- The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons 74
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. 61
- The pie graphs below show the results of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which girls participate. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aces between the period 1900 and 2000. Overall, during both the period Asia had...
^^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ad the largest population in the world. Whereas north America was stable during both th...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ulation in the world with 60% of total. While Europe had 25% population including Rus...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23353293413 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5378627323 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473053892216 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0104667143 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2307692308 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201189728835 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871050574627 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753539877264 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1584082408 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996584778543 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.