A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Give contact details for when you are away
Give instructions about how to care for your pet
Describe other household duties
Dear Amy,
Hope you are doing great. Thank you very much for agreeing to look after my house and my dog, Tommy for a few days. Thanks to your help, me and Papia would be able to enjoy a much-needed vacation. Before I leave, I wanted to walk you through some important details.
To begin with, you can buzz me anytime at my cell number at 123433721. If I am not available, please leave a voicemail and I will call you back.
Additionally, please feed Tommy thrice a day. I have kept his food on the top shelf right above the kitchen sink. Also, he needs to be taken out for a walk and bio break in the morning and evening time. Tommy is a friendly dog and he is quite fond of you. So I think you both will gel well.
Finally, it would be great if you could water the plants every other day. Also the garbage truck arrives every Thursday morning and please do not mix up recyclable wastes with other wastes.
I have packed the refrigerator with food for you. The house is all there for you to enjoy.
Once again I cannot thank you enough for your help and I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d be enjoying the much-needed vacation. Before I leave I want to walk you through some...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... they are very precious to me. And also dont forget to dump the garbage on Wednesday...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28282828283 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25023664141 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3488165404 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.5333333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230433874488 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787463013688 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532192339143 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12512182781 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688457718139 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.