The graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The data provides information on average temperatures and annual hours of sunshine in London, New York and Sydney.
The temperature patterns for London and New York are similar, although New York has warmer summers and colder winters. In both cities, peaks occur in July and August, at 23° in London and 29°in New York. In contrast, Sydney 'said hottest weather is in December /January when temperatures average 25°. During this period, New York'temperatures dip to an average o around 5°, compared with 8°in London. On the other hand, Sydney's lowest average temperatures in July are just over 15°.
As far as hours of sunshine are concerned, New York and Sydney have similar averages of 2,535and 2,473 hours respectively. London, however, has a much lower average of 1,180 hours.
Clearly, London is the coldest city and has fewest hours of sunshine. New York has the hottest summers, but Sydney enjoys the warmest overall climate.
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- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. 61
- Some people work for the same Organisation all their working life. Other think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'said the hottest'.
Suggestion: said the hottest
...and 29°in New York. In contrast, Sydney said hottest weather is in December /January when te...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Sydneys the lowest'.
Suggestion: Sydneys the lowest
...ed with 8°in London. On the other hand, Sydneys lowest average temperatures in July are just o...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the fewest'.
Suggestion: has the fewest
...Clearly, London is the coldest city and has fewest hours of sunshine. New York has the hot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18300653595 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64738963478 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4264534367 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194163587114 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926306454372 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647162058925 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144953864637 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715619817203 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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