With all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other things.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, one of the most considerable issues in the world is waste of money. It is well-known fact that some countries show the myriad expencenses on space exploration while others suffering from starvation. Opinions are devided as to whether expencises on space wondering are waste of money or not, but it is my firm conviction that money should be better spent on other things, due to the incredibly significant issues mentioned below .
First of all, we must address this kind of problems which led to the waste of money. It is blatantly obvious that smoking is the most unsolved problem in th...
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Sentence: It is blatantly obvious that smoking is the most unsolved problem in the a lot of societies that may solve through the big expencies.
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Sentence: On the other hand, this issue make more risks for babies, because women who smoke bring into the world abnormal children.
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Sentence: It is well-known fact that some countries show the myriad expencenses on space exploration while others suffering from starvation.
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Sentence: Opinions are devided as to whether expencises on space wondering are waste of money or not, but it is my firm conviction that money should be better spent on other things, due to the incredibly significant issues mentioned below .
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Sentence: It is blatantly obvious that smoking is the most unsolved problem in the a lot of societies that may solve through the big expencies.
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