Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

In India, we exist with vivid cultures around us. India is a country with 26 states and 100+ cultures they follow. In the traditional period, people are often caught a sight dressing up based on their cultures. A hoard of crowd in nowadays are seen in varieties of other looks.

I disagree on the point which says you can tell a lot about people by their clothing. But at festivals and social gatherings, they prefer to wear clothes which their culture promotes. Whereas in recent times people are greatly influenced by the celebrities or fashion designers they follow. People try to carry the clothing which they often observe actors or actresses wearing in concerts or movies.

To illustrate, recently in a concert a female singer wore a Patiala dress, after few days her fans not only did they uploaded photos of them dressing up in a Patiala dress but also tagging the singer in their post on social media. Social media play a vital role in gearing up fever among the crowd. It can be said access to social media has elevated the craze of different fashion style in India.

Summing up, I would say clothing can be affected by a bunch of factors, culture is one of the reasons which direct people towards what to dress but it can be overseen by ongoing social media affection lately. People like to keep themselves updated with the latest winds in the country. Clothing only reflects the way a person wants to look and nothing about the person they are.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...sed on their cultures. A hoard of crowd in nowadays are seen in varieties of other looks. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70542635659 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34913140635 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4265479157 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168091999412 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640854200732 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894024858056 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102997401711 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682535786622 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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